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    Your essay will need answer the following prompt: Analyze how your character's experiences with Americans or in America are different based on their race or ethnicity. You will need to included textual evidence to support your argument. Incomplete / Poor (f) prompt essay does not follow or answer prompt essay prompt is answered but could be supported better. Format does not follow Miss Sturm's format for final drafts.

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    Your essay will need answer the following prompt: Analyze how your character's experiences with Americans or in America are different based on their race or ethnicity. You will need to included textual evidence to support your argument. Incomplete / Poor (f) prompt essay does not follow or answer prompt essay prompt is answered but could be supported better. Format does not follow Miss Sturm's format for final drafts.

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    Your essay will need answer the following prompt: Analyze how your character's experiences with Americans or in America are different based on their race or ethnicity. You will need to included textual evidence to support your argument. Incomplete / Poor (f) prompt essay does not follow or answer prompt essay prompt is answered but could be supported better. Format does not follow Miss Sturm's format for final drafts.

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    MulticulturalismEssay

    DueMondayApril6,2015(thisistheMondayyoureturnfromSpringBreak).

    Inadditiontofinishingabookreportyouwillbeconstructinganessay.Youressaywillneedanswerthe
    followingprompt:

    AnalyzehowyourcharactersexperienceswithAmericansorinAmericaaredifferentbasedontheirraceor
    ethnicity.Youwillneedtoincludedtextualevidencetosupportyourargument.

    Incomplete/Poor(F)

    Meh(C)

    Excellente!(A)

    Prompt

    Essaydoesnotfollowor
    answerprompt

    Essaypromptis
    answeredbutcouldbe
    supportedbetter.

    Promptisfullyanswered
    andevidenceis
    exemplary.

    Format

    DoesnotfollowMiss
    Sturmsformatforfinal
    drafts.

    FollowsMissSturms
    finalformat.

    Intro

    Introdoesnotincludea
    thetitleand
    author/director,
    summaryofplotand
    thesisstatement.

    Bodyparagraphs

    CitationsandQuotes

    Summaryisnot
    thoroughormissing
    partsofthesisinthe
    wrongplace.

    Greatjob,summarizing
    theplot.Thesisis
    strong,wellwordedand
    inthecorrectplace.

    Bodyparagraphsare
    surfacelevelandlisting
    morethananalysisorin
    depth.Thereismore
    summarythan
    connectionand
    explanation.Evidence
    isnotspecific.

    Bodyparagraphswaiver
    Allparagraphsare
    betweenspecificand
    insightfulandgobeyond
    analytical,andtopical
    thesurfacelevel.All
    andnonsupported.
    pointsareclearly
    supported.

    Nocitationsorquotes
    areincluded.Quotes
    areatthebeginningor
    endofbodyparagraphs.

    Connection/synthesisis
    incompleteorminor.
    Quotesareintroduced
    minorly,butsometimes
    interjectedintobody
    paragraphswithout

    Quotescitedcorrectly
    andusegreatsandwich
    technique!Youdoa
    greatjobfollowingup
    yourquotewith
    synthesisand

    introductionor
    connection.Incorrect
    citation.

    connection.

    Conclusionismissinga
    clencherandsummary,
    thesisismissingorin
    thewrongplace.

    Clenchercouldbe
    Yourclencherleftme
    stronger,andsummary
    thinkingaboutyour
    ispresentbut
    paper!Thesiswas
    incomplete.Thesisis
    rewordedandsummary
    presentintherightplace
    wasthoroughand
    butnotnotreworded
    excellent.
    fromfirstthesis.

    Paperispoorly
    organized,hardtofollow
    andconfusing.Didnot
    followthesis.

    WithsomeeffortIcould Followedthesisperfectly
    understandandfollow
    Greatorganizationand
    thepaper.Partially
    easytofollow.
    followedthesis.

    Grammar,Usage,
    spelling,fluencyetc.

    Paperincludessomany
    mistakesthatitishard
    tofolloworunderstand.
    You/Iisused

    Includessomeerrors,
    buttheoverallmessage
    ofthepaperisnot
    inhibitedbytheseerrors.

    FinalDrafthaslittleor
    noerrorsanditdoesnot
    affectcomprehensionat
    all.

    Conclusions

    Organization

    Agoodwriterwill.
    brainstorm
    collectquotesfromtheirreading
    readaloudslowlytoyourself,afamilyorfriend
    varysentencestructure(essayincludesshortsentences,longsentencesandmediumsentences)
    usesgoodvocabulary
    revise,revise,revise
    editsforsentencefragments,commasplices,awkwardphrasing
    doesnotuseIoryouorwe/our
    doesnotsayinconclusion,inthisessay,

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