Documenti di Didattica
Documenti di Professioni
Documenti di Cultura
Form: Design
Absent or
Below Basic
Figures or formatting do not
match the papers purpose or
are not explained by author.
Developing
Proficient
Advanced
Form: Genre
Content:
Information
Content:
Support
Citations:
Readability:
Outstanding control of
language, including effective
diction and sentence variety.
Content:
Organization
Comments: On what two or three areas do you think this writer needs to focus before submitting this document
Design: the white space after the experience section is doesnt match the white space after the other similar sections (Objective, Achievements, Education).
maybe change margin to allow the January date to fit on one line. Consider some formatting for the title under each job title (italics?)
Genre: Seems ok
Content Information and Support: Try to explicitly point out the skills that you mention in the Objective. Give examples of motivating others in the Leadership
section.
Content Organization: Everything feels a bit separated Part of that is just the way resumes are but also try to echo and emphasis points you made in the
objective with writing later in the document.
Citations: No citations necessary
Readability: First sentence keeps should be keep. Consider adding more detail to some bullets, such as the Arrange weekly meetings bullet. The team building
exercises sentence is slightly unclear.