The Bounded Bounds of

Womanhood
by Soyoon Kim
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TIME SUBMITTED 20-JAN-2014 12:25PM
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CHARACTER COUNT 3261
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The Bounded Bounds of Womanhood
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Well done. This is clear, succinct, and detailed.
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Comment 1
Morrison's or a certain character's? Unclear.
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WC
Word choice error:
Sometimes choosing the correct word to express exactly what you have to say is very difficult to
do. Word choice errors can be the result of not paying attention to the word or trying too hard to
come up with a fancier word when a simple one is appropriate. A thesaurus can be a handy tool
when you're trying to find a word that's similar to, but more accurate than, the one you're looking
up. However, it can often introduce more problems if you use a word thinking it has exactly the
same meaning.
Strikethrough.
Comment 3
I'm wondering then what you think Morrison's greater objective was with this theme?
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The composition contains brief intro and conclusion which focuses on a theme.
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Details, paraphrases, quotations are present to support the main ideas.
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The composition contains a strong sense of organization within and between paragraphs. It is unified and
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The composition shows a clear command of language - through its vivid word choice and use of appropriate
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The composition contains few, if any, distracting errors in grammar and mechanics. The compositions
presentation is neat and polished. Header and title are present.
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Proper credit is given as directed in MLA. MLA procedures are followed.
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500 - 600 words. Reduction for each 50 words+ or -