Take Home Midterm Test of Introduction Translation

Analyzing Register Movie Script and Analyzing Indonesian Subtitle of English Script
Title : Corpse Bride
Release: 2005
Scene 1:
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Discussing about fianc and fiance
should liking each other when they will
married.
Tenor : Hilgrade (Victorias chaperon),
Victorias other (acdiline !"erglot),
Victorias #ather (#inis !"erglot) and Victoria
($he daughter of acdiline !"erglot)
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: Victoria !"erglot is a
daughter of acdiline !"erglot and #inis
!"erglot, which is a family with high social
status. $he relationship between parents and
daughter are not really intimate. $here is no
lo"e between acdiline and #inis, because
they married for their parents.
Hildegarde is a Victorias chaperon. %he has
intimate relationship to Victoria.
S: Victoria: &h, Hildegarde
IS: Hildegarde.
S: 'hat if Victor and (, don)t like each other*
IS: Bagaimana jika Victor dan aku tak saling
menyukai?
S: Victoria mother + ,s if that has anything to
do with marriage.
IS: Dan itu terjadi karena pernikahan ini?
R: Seakan-akan itu ada hubungannya dengan
pernikahan?
S: Do you suppose your father and ( like each
other*
IS: Kau pikir ibu dan ayah saling suka?
S : Victoria: %urely you must a little*
IS: Tak sedikitpun?
R Tentu meski sedikit kan?
S: Victorias Mother : &f course not .
IS:Tentu tidak.
S: Victorias Father : &f course not.
IS: Tentu tidak.
S: Victorias Mother : -et those corsets laced
properly.
IS: !katkan korset itu dengan benar.
S: ( can hear you speak without gasping.
IS: Kau masih bisa bicara dengan terengah-
engah.
R: "ku masih mendengar kau bicara dengan
terengah-engah.
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Scene 2:
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Discussing about Victors arriage that
will bring a "ictory to Van Dort family.
Tenor : Victor Van Dort, Victors other (/eil
Van Dort), and Victors #ather ('illiam Van
Dort)
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: Victor Van Dort is a son of
/eil Van Dort and 'illiam Van Dort, which is a
family with middle social status, e"en almost
low status. $he relationship between parents
and son are 0uite intimate.
ayhew is a Van Dorts employee.
S: Victors Father : 1ou)"e certainly hooked a
winner this time, Victor.
IS: Kau memancing ikan kali ini Victor.
R: #Kali ini kau sungguh menjadi pemenang
Victor$
S: Victors Mother: /ow, all you ha"e to do is
reel her in.
IS: Sekarang kau tinggal tarik kailmu.
R: #Sekarang kau tinggal membuatnya
terkejut$
S: Victor : ()m already reeling, other.
IS: "ku sudah menariknya bu.
R: #"ku sudah mengejutkan bu$
S: %houldn)t Victoria !"erglot be marrying a
lord or something*
IS: Bukankah Victoria %&erglot seharusnya
menikahi bangsa'an?
R: #Bukankah Victoria %&erglot seharusnya
menikahi bangsa'an atau sejenisnya?$
S: Victors Mother : &h, nonsense2 'e)re
e"ery bit as good as the !"erglots.
IS: (mong kosong) Kita juga terhormat seperti
keluarga %&erglot.
R: #(mong kosong) Kita juga sedikit terhormat
seperti keluarga %&erglot.$
S: ( always knew ( deser"ed better than a fish
merchant)s life.
IS: Hidupku seharusnya lebih baik dari
sekedar menjadi pedagang ikan.
R: #"ku yakin aku pantas mendapat
kehidupan lebih baik dari sekedar hidup
menjadi seorang pedagang ikan.$
S: Victor: 3ut ()"e ne"er e"en spoken to her.
IS: Tapi aku tak pernah bicara dengannya.
S: Victors Mother : 'ell, at least we ha"e
that in
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our fa"or.
IS: !tu keuntungan bagi kita.
R: #*aling tidak kita akan membuatnya terjadi
sesuai kehendak kita$
S: ayhew2 %ilence that blasted coughing.
IS: +ayhe') Hentikan batukmu.
R: #+ayhe') Hentikan batukmu itu.$
Scene :
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Discussing about arriage.
Tenor : Victorias other (acdiline !"erglot)
and Victorias #ather (#inis !"erglot).
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: Victoria !"erglot is a
daughter of acdiline !"erglot and #inis
!"erglot, which is a family with high social
status. $he relationship between parents and
daughter are not really intimate. $here is no
lo"e between acdiline and #inis, because
they married for their parents.
S: Victorias Mother : arriage is a
partnership, a little tit !or tat (idiom).
IS: *ernikahan adalah kemitraan sedikit
timbal balik
R: #*ernikahan adalah pencarian rekan dan
saling membalas dengan setimpal$
S: 1ou)d think a lifetime watching us...
IS: Kau pikir seumur hidup melihat kita.
R:#Seharusnya kau berpikir setelah melihat
kami...$
Scene ":
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Victors mother comment on Victor
appearance.
Tenor : Victor and Victors other
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: Van Dort family really wants
to make their status higher. Victors parents
are 0uite care to Victor.
S: Victors Mother : 5ook at the way you)re
standing.
IS: ,ihat caramu berdiri.
R: #*erhatikan caramu berdiri.$
S: 1ou look like you got rickets or something...
IS: Kau seperti kena penyakit bungkuk ..
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R: #Kau seperti terkena penyakit bungkuk atau
sejenisnya..$
Scene #:
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Discussing about !"erglots House.
Tenor : Victors other (/eil Van Dort), and
Victors #ather ('illiam Van Dort)
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: /eil Van Dort and 'illiam
Van Dort are husband and wife.
S: Victors Mother : &h, beautiful, innit*
IS: !ndah bukan?
S: Victors Father: (t)s not as big as our place,
dear.
IS: Tak semegah rumah kita sayang.
R: #!ni tak sebesar rumah kita sayang. $
S: Victors Father : 3it shabby really, isn)t it*
IS: Sebenarnya agak kumuh bukan?
S: Victors Mother : %hut up.
IS: diam.
Scene $:
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Discussing about Victors arriage that
will bring a "ictory to Van Dort family.
Tenor : Victor Van Dort and Victoria !"erglot
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: Victoria and Victor dont
know each other. $hey will marry because of
their parents.
S: Victor: Do forgi"e me.
IS: +aa-kan aku.
S: Victoria: 1ou play beautifully.
IS: *ermainan piano bagus.
R: #Kau memainkannya dengan indah$
S: Victor : (... (... ( do apologi7e, iss
!"erglot.How rude of me to... 'ell...
IS: +aa-kan aku .ona %&erglot. "ku tak
sopan telah/
S: !8cuse me.
IS: +aa-.
S: Victoria: other won)t let me near the
piano.
IS: !buku melarangku mendekati piano.
R: #!buku tak mengi0inkanku mendekati piano.
S: usic is improper for a young lady.
IS: +usik tak pantas bagi seorang gadis.
S: $oo passionate, she says.
IS: Terlalu membangkitkan semangat
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katanya.
S: Victor: (f ( may ask, iss !"erglot...
IS: 1ika boleh aku bertanya .ona %&erglot.
S: ...where is your chaperon*
IS: Di mana pelayan "nda?
S: Victoria: :erhaps, in... (n "iew of the
circumstances...
IS: +ungkin sedang.. Kalau begitu
R: #+ungkin sedang.. +engingat keadaan
S: ...you could call me Victoria.
IS: Kau boleh memanggilku Victoria.
R: #Kau bisa memanggilku Victoria.$
S: Victor: 1es, of course. 'ell...
IS: Tentu saja.
S: Victoria...
IS: Victoria..
S: Victoria: 1es, Victor.
IS: 2a Victor.
S: Victor: $omorrow, we are to be m...
IS: Besok kita akan/
S: ... ...
IS: +/.+/
S: Victoria: arried.
IS: +enikah.
S: Victor: 1es. arried.
IS: 2a menikah.
S: Victoria: %ince ( was a child, ()"e... ()"e
dreamt of my wedding day.
IS: Sejak kecil aku mengimpikan
pernikahanku.
R: #Sejak aku kecil aku memimpikan hari
pernikahanku$
S: ( always hoped to find someone. ( was
deeply in lo"e with.
IS: "ku berharap bisa menemukan pria yang
amat kucintai.
;
S: %omeone to spend the rest of my life with.
IS: Seseorang untuk berbagi hari tuaku.
R: #Seseorang yang menemaniku di sisa
hidupku.$
S: %illy, isn)t it*
IS: Konyol bukan?
S: Victor: 1es, silly.
IS: 2a konyol.
S: /o. /o, not at all, no.
IS: Tidak. Sama sekali tidak konyol.
R: #Tidak. Sama sekali tidak.$
S: &h, dear. ()m sorry.
IS: "staga. +aa-kan aku.
S: Victorias Mother: 'hat impropriety is
this*
IS: !ni sangat tak pantas.
R: #"pa-apaan ini?$
S: 1ou shouldn)t be alone together.
IS: Kalian tak boleh berduaan.
S: Here it is, one minute before ;, and you)re
not at the rehearsal.
IS: Sekarang sudah hampir pukul 3 sore dan
kalian belum mulai berlatih.
S: :astor -alswells is waiting. <ome at once.
IS: *astor 4als'ells sudah menunggu.
5epatlah berangkat.
Scene %:
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Victor is regretting his fail in uttered the
"ow for marriage.
Tenor : Victor Van Dort and /ews Deli"erer.
Mode: %poken.
S: Victor: &h, Victoria.
IS: (h Victoria.
S: %he must think ()m such a fool.
IS: !a pasti menganggapku bodoh.
S: $his day couldn)t get any worse.
IS: !tu yang terburuk untuk hari ini.
=
R:#Hari ini jangan sampai lebih buruk lagi.$
S: News Reporter: Hear ye, hear ye2
>ehearsal in ruins as Van Dort boy causes
chaos2
IS: *erhatian) ,atihan hancur karena putra
Van Dort mengacaukannya.
S: #ishy fianc could be canned2
IS: Tunangan ikan aneh mungkin harus
dikalengkan)
S: !"erglots all fired up as Van Dort disaster
ruins rehearsal2
IS: Keluarga %&erglot terbakar saat Van Dort
mengacaukan latihan)
Scene &:
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: !8ercising in uttering "ow.
Tenor : Victor Van Dort
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: Victor meets a corpse,
named !mily. $hey dont know each other.
Victor is afraid to her.
S: Victor: (t really shouldn)t be all that difficult.
IS: Seharusnya itu tidak sulit.
R: #Sebenarnya itu tidak sulit.$
S: (t)s ?ust a few simple "ows.
IS: !tu hanya ikrar sederhana.
S: 'ith this hand, ( will take your wine.
IS: Dengan tangan ini aku akan mengambil
anggurmu.
S: /o.
IS: Tidak.
S: 'ith this hand...
IS: Dengan tangan ini/
S: ...( will cup your...
IS: "ku akan meremas..
S: &h, goodness, no.
IS: "staga bukan.
S: 'ith this...
IS: Dengan..
S: 'ith this...
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IS: Dengan/
S: 'ith this candle, ( will...
IS: Dengan lilin ini aku akan..
S: ( will...
IS: "ku akan/
S: ( will set your mother on fire.
IS: "ku akan membakar ibumu.
R: #"ku akan membuat ibumu terbakar.$
S: &h, it)s no use.
IS: Tak ada gunanya.
S: 'ith this hand, ( will lift your sorrows.
IS: Dengan tangan ini akan kusingkirkan
deritamu.
S: 1our cup will ne"er empty, for ( will be your
wine.
IS: 5a'anmu tak akan kosong Karena aku
akan menjadi anggurmu.
S: rs. !"erglot.
IS: .y. %&erglot.
S: 1ou look ra"ishing this e"ening.
IS: "nda cantik sekali malam ini.
S: 'hat)s that, r. !"erglot* <all you ADadA*
(f you insist, sir.
IS: +aa- .y. %&erglot? +emanggil anda
ayah? 1ika anda memaksa.
R: #+aa- Tuan %&erglot? *anggil anda ayah?
Baiklah 1ika anda memaksa tuan. $
S: 'ith this candle, ( will light your way in
darkness.
IS: Dengan lilin ini kuterangi jalanmu di
kegelapan.
S: 'ith this ring...
IS: Dengan cincin ini..
S: ...( ask you to be mine.
IS: "ku meminangmu. #or65H(!5%7 "ku
memintamu untuk menjadi milikku.$
S: Emily : ( do.
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IS: "ku bersedia.
S: Emily: 1ou may kiss the bride.
IS: Kau boleh mencium pengantin 'anitanya.
Scene ':
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Discussing about going to speak about
Victors and !milys marriage.
Tenor : Victor Van Dort and !mily
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: Victor doesnt really want to
be with !mily. !mily ?ust trusts Victor, because
she thinks that she is already married to
Victor.
S: Emily : ( spent so long in the darkness...
IS: Begitu lama aku di dunia kegelapan/
R: #"ku terlalu lama berada dalam
kegelapan.$
S: ...(d almost forgotten how beautiful the
moonlight is.
IS: .. aku hampir lupa indahnya sinar
rembulan.
R: #/ aku hampir lupa betapa indahnya sinar
rembulan itu.$
S: Maggot: Hey, ( think you dropped
something.
IS: Kau menjatuhkan sesuatu.
R: #"ku rasa kau menjatuhkan sesuatu.$
S: Victor: Hold on, hold on.
IS: Sebentar sebentar.
S: ( think ( should prepare other and #ather
for the big news.
IS: Sebaiknya kupersiapkan orangtuaku untuk
kabar bahagia ini.
S: ()ll go ahead and you...
IS: "ku pergi dulu dan kau /
S: ...wait here.
IS: / tunggu disini.
S: Emily: :erfect.
IS: Sempurna.
S: Victor : ( won)t be long.
IS: "ku tak akan lama.
S: %tay right here. ()ll be right back.
IS: Tunggu disini. "ku segera kembali.
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S: Emily : &kay.
IS: (ke.
S: Victor: /o peeking.
IS: 1angan mengintip.
Scene 1(:
Register Script (S), the Indonesian Subtitle (IS) and
The Revision (R)
Field: Discussing about Victor married to a
corpse.
Tenor : Victorias other (acdiline !"erglot),
Victorias #ather (#inis !"erglot) and Victoria
($he daughter of acdiline !"erglot)
Mode: %poken.
Social Distance: Victoria !"erglot is a
daughter of acdiline !"erglot and #inis
!"erglot, which is a family with high social
status. $he relationship between parents and
daughter are not really intimate. !"en,
acdiline doesnt trust to Victoria.
Hildegarde is a Victorias chaperon. %he has
intimate relationship to Victoria.
S: Victoria: (t)s true, other2
IS: Sungguh Bu)
S: Victor is married to a dead woman.
IS: Victor menikahi gadis yang sudah mati.
S: ( saw her. , corpse2 %tanding right here
with Victor.
IS: "ku melihatnya. Sebuah mayat. !a berdiri
disini bersama Victor.
S: Victorias Mother: Victor was in your
room*
IS: Victor memasuki kamarmu*
R: Victor berada di dalam kamarmu?
S: Victoria: ( ha"e to help him.
IS: "ku harus menolongnya.
S: Victorias Mother: $he scandal2
IS: (tu skandal2
S: Hilgrade : <ome sit in your chair, dearie.,
1ou)re shaking li)e a lea! . (idiom)
IS: Duduklah di kursimu, sayang. Dau
gemetar.
R: Duduklah di kursimu sayang. Kau
gemetaran.
S: 5et Hilde fetch you a blanket.
IS: Biarkan Hilde mengambilkan selimut
untukmu.
S: Victorias Mother: #etch her a strait?acket2
%he)s completely mad2
IS: "mbilkan dia baju pengikat ) !a sudah gila)
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S: <ome, Hildegarde.
IS: "yo Hilgarde.
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