Florence Task Levitation / Yowa Yowa Comment A good start but I would have liked to have seen more

images. Also you should have two sets of observations one from class and one from home. Well done an excellent section you have really understood the process and have demonstrated it well. The analysis is in depth and and shows your understanding of the Artist. This section has potential but I would have liked to have seen enlargements to go with the contact sheets. Good work the h/w has been well thought out and executed well. The links to the chaplin film are great but maybe you could embed the original alongside your work. The colours are beautiful your flowers are particularly strong well done. The analysis is also strong well done. ? Grade T-

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Wag - B+ Target - A Overall comment Well done you have worked extremely hard and produced some excellent work, there are a few sections that need to be revisited but on the whole excellent work