This was a good start to the issue of tipping, but you still have a long way to go.

For the final portfolio, you need to make sure and finish the assignment. Right now, you are only about half way to the actual word requirement. In revision, you can talk about ways of increasing gratuity and how sometimes the location can affect tipping (i.e. sometimes the closer to a university campus, tips aren't as high because of student population, etc.). In addition, you also need to: In your portfolio, annotate your second draft of assignment two by answering the following questions: If you were to write this paper again, what would you do differently? Think in specific terms, like planning, development of topic, collecting sources, etc. What could I (the teacher) have done differently to help you prepare this assignment? Think in terms of specific activities, exercises, or class work that I could do in order to help you understand the assignment more, address the assignment more appropriately, etc.