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Process Report YOUR NAME: RKeshia Smith TITLE OF PAPER: Equality 1.

How much time (about) did you spend planning this paper? (Include reading, note-taking, invention, brainstorming, outlining, etc.) Explain what you did. In the process of planning this paper I think it took an hour and a half. I read my article a bunch of time because I wanted to make sure I knew every detail, and I wanted to make sure I had a good idea of the main took or idea of his speech. I also took time to do a brief outline of what would be the topic of each paragraph and the details that were going to be in it.

2. How much time did you spend drafting? Revising? I didnt spend a lot of time revising my draft because I knew we were going to do it in class. 3. What do you believe are the strengths of this paper? On what levels does it work well? The strength of my paper is my conclusion. I think I did a good job concluding my thoughts.

4. What do you think are the weaknesses in the paper? What might you do differently or change in this paper if you had more time? The weakness of my paper is the support in my body paragraph. I supported my thesis a little but I think I couldve gave more details.

5. What do you want a reader to think or understand after having read this paper? (This should be something he or she didnt already know.) After reading this paper I want the reader to know what the purpose of this speech was. Hopefully they will understand the

use of ethos, pathos, and logo and how president Obama used them.

6. What kind of feedback would you like me to give on your paper? If you ultimately decide to revise this for your portfolio, how can I help? I want you to tell me how I can improve on supporting my thesis more in me body paragraphs.

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