小姜老师写作基础课第二课措辞 V2

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TOEFL, SAT, GRE
James Jiang
Summer 2013
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TOEFL, SAT, GRE GRE Lecture 2
James Jiang
June 23, 2013
Outline of Lecture 2
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1.FormalSemi-formal Colloquial 2. GeneralSpecific 3. AbstractConcrete
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guy TV photo Ya (Can ya give me an example?) Youre

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cool dude Think about it
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Its a lot can't won't
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Well You know Anyway Like I just said
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And... But... Because... So... Or...

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Second person pronouns (e.g. you, your) Simple word and incomplete sentences Contractions (e.g. youre, couldnt, its) and abbreviations (e.g. TV, photos) First Person (Use of I is a display of emotions)

Complex (longer words, longer sentences) Objective (avoid "I think...") Full words (no contractions (it's, you're etc.), avoid abbreviations (BBC (The British Broadcasting Corporation)) Third person (avoid "you")

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adorable (cute) person (guy) person (dude) excellent (good) television (TV)

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photograph (photo) Additionally... (And...) Moreover... (And...) Nevertheless... (But...) However... (But...)

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Therefore (So...) Thus... (So...) Alternatively... (Or...) Instead... (Or...)
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Otherwise... (Or...) type of (kind of) somewhat (sort of)
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School is a big thing in my life. You should sleep eight hours each night.
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School is an important component of my life. One should sleep eight hours each night.
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bad, horrific, disgusting, inferior nice, beautiful, appealing, good-looking break, destruct, sabotage, vandalize cause, motive, stimulus good, delightful, outstanding

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bad, horrific, disgusting, inferior nice, beautiful, appealing, good-looking break, destruct, sabotage, vandalize cause, motive, stimulus good, delightful, outstanding

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bad meal bad book bad weather bad person
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awful, terrible, lousy, appalling (person) nasty, unpleasant, horrible
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love success freedom good moral democracy

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spoon table green sun
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To excel in college, students have to work hard. To excel in college, students need to attend every class; actively get involved in lecture activities; preview lecture materials before classes; and review your notes after each class; finish all the assignments before they are due; visit professors during their office hours.
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I think I disagree I believe you
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I
It is generally agreed that Most people would support the idea that It could be suggested that It could be claimed that
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I
As this research indicates, It could be proposed that It has been found that This evidence suggests that
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You
You should learn some musical instrument when you are at your young age. You will learn the lesson that cheating does not get you through life.
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You
Children should learn some musical instrument when they are at their young age. People will learn the lesson that cheating does not get them through life.
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Why it is important to avoid the use of repeating words or phrases? Simply because the text is boring if it's repetitive.
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Different aspects of a thesis require different expressions, that is, a different word reflecting a different perspective on your paper's theme as it relates to different circumstances.
A Guide to Writing in History and Classics by M. Damen
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The Romans conquered Gaul. The Romans spread their culture all over Europe. The Romans ate boatloads of bread.
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Military success is what made the Romans successful in most of their successes.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting university education is the most important factor for success in life.
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Higher education, institution of higher University education, further education, institution of further education, campus, college Important Factor Significant, central, main, major Aspect, part, portion, phase, side, ingredient, component, element Achievement, accomplishment, triumph, attainment, realization
Success

All studies show that video games increase visual ability and motor development. No one has proven that violent video games can directly cause violent behavior in children. The media always exaggerates the truth about video games and violence.
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many most nearly all the majority of some rarely infrequently hardly ever

All
Never
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few very few a fraction of almost none with few exceptions hardly any sometimes often usually frequently almost always
None
Always
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It seems to be the best solution. It might be suggested that The plan was generally welcomed.
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businessman business people chairman chairperson common man common person, average person, ordinary people
craftsman craftsperson, artisan fireman firefighter

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forefathers ancestors freshman first-year student mailman postal worker, mail carrier mankind human beings man-made manufacturedsynthetic
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When a student writes a paper, he must proofread his paper carefully.
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When a student writes a paper, he or she (he/she, or s/he) should use the spellchecker on his or her computer. When students write their papers, they should use the spellcheckers on their computers.
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Summary of Lecture 2
Iyou all, always, never, none man, salesman, he, his
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