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The Raping of Ava DeSantis: A Horror Novel
The Raping of Ava DeSantis: A Horror Novel
The Raping of Ava DeSantis: A Horror Novel
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NOW THE #1 BESTSELLER IN AMERICAN HORROR (PRINT EDITION) — From Hollywood's 'Queen of Horror' comes the debut novel that has everyone talking:

"Best Novel Of The Year" — Great-Novels.com

"Best Thriller Of The Year" —Top10Novels

“An Instant Horror Classic!” —News Atlanta

“One Of The Best Books Of 2015.” —AMB Magazine

“She’s The Next Stephen King.” —Horror Society

“Horror’s Next New York Times Bestseller.” —All Indie Magazine

“It’s Like Nothing Else Out There.” —Gotham News

Readers of New York Times Bestsellers Gone Girl, The Girl on the Train and Luckiest Girl Alive left wanting more will devour the debut novel from Hollywood screenwriter turned author MYLO CARBIA.

Set in 1991 in Atlanta, Georgia, "The Raping of Ava DeSantis" tells the story of a working class college student who is brutally attacked by three wealthy fraternity brothers, then confronted with the decision of a lifetime: accept money to stay quiet or seek justice with the police. What she does in response is the basis of this captivating woman’s revenge thriller story that will have readers talking for years to come.

With brilliantly written characters, bone-chilling, fast-paced scenes and a double twist ending, "The Raping of Ava DeSantis" is the perfect blend of suspense, thriller and horror — guaranteed to entertain both female and male readers alike.

TAGLINE: A poor college student brutally attacked by three wealthy fraternity brothers seeks revenge against their families years later.

THEMES: Vigilante Justice, Female Protagonist, Serial Killers, Wealthy Versus Poor, College Life, Southern Life, Urban Settings, United States, American Horror, Horror, Revenge Thrillers, Mystery Thrillers, Psychological Thrillers, Revenge Stories, Classic Horror Books, Horror Fiction Classics

AUTHOR: Mylo Carbia spent her childhood years writing to escape the horrors of growing up in a haunted house in Jackson, New Jersey. After years of ghostwriting films in Hollywood — earning her the nickname “The Queen of Horror” — she moved into the literary world to write a series of bestselling novels all featuring strong female protagonists. "The Raping of Ava DeSantis" is her debut novel.

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Release dateOct 13, 2015
ISBN9780996565226
The Raping of Ava DeSantis: A Horror Novel
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Mylo Carbia

MYLO CARBIA (a.k.a. "The Queen of Horror") is an American screenwriter turned #1 BESTSELLING AUTHOR widely known for her work in the horror, thriller and science fiction genres. Born and raised in Jackson, New Jersey, Carbia spent her childhood years writing to escape the horrors of growing up in a haunted house. Her very first screenplay was optioned 28 days after completion, earning Carbia a "three picture deal" and the cover of Hollywood Scriptwriter in 2003. After that time, she quietly penned numerous film projects under her production company Zohar Films, earning the reputation of being Hollywood’s Number One Horror Film Ghostwriter. Carbia recently moved into the literary world to release a series of bestselling novels all featuring strong female protagonists. Her debut novel "The Raping of Ava DeSantis" hit #1 Bestseller in Horror weeks before its official release date, and continues to receive critical acclaim from both avid readers and critics worldwide.

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  • Rating: 1 out of 5 stars
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    All the 5 star reviews make me jealous. Seems they read a different book. In my mind, there is a difference between "horror" and horrid people, horrific situations, and horrendous outcomes. I wish Carbia well in her new career but feel the connections are missed, descriptions sparse and resolutions plucked from a cheat sheet. This would have been better served as a screen play for someone else to drop in useful details.Oh wait, did I mention the S&M? Perhaps that brought in more stars.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
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    It starts great but the story just gets odder towards the end. The ending itself is confusing and implausible. The writing is good. The characters are probably meant to be unidimensional.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
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    Absolutely a page turner. I finished it in one sitting.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
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    Finished this in one evening. The writing is crisp, sharp and very entertaining. If you’re going to go there, go there as they say. The author definitely, unflinchingly does exactly that.

    Loved this book!
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Pretty great story.
    It’s not a horror in my opinion. But I also love vengeance and this book most certainly has that.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Once you start reading, you’ll get hooked on flicking pages upon pages that gets you sleep-deprived. Well engineered masterpiece!! Loved every sacrifice I made to deprive my self from sleep. It was worth it!
  • Rating: 1 out of 5 stars
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    This is a complete toilet fire. I absolutely refuse to believe that this garbage won any awards that the author didn’t pay for. The writing is poor even for a screenplay; she describes things as you would for a script. She tells; she doesn’t show. The plot is completely outlandish, exploitative and sensationalist. Relies on racist and sexist stereotypes to describe characters. It’s awful. I’m mad I spent time reading this, but finished it so I could warn others. You’re welcome. Zero stars.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Great read overall; i think the ending didn’t make sense ! Felt like it was rushed
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I disagree with the one stars! This was definitely a the page-turner I’ve been looking for! Very well written, wouldn’t change a thing!
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    This well-crafted debut novel of Mylo Carbia is a definite must-read! Just a few pages in and I can’t put it down. The story shows the thin line between justice and revenge, and Carbia did it in one sweep. The plot is very impressive, Ava wanted revenge, but you’ll never know when she’ll strike and how she’ll do it. I can’t help but cringed and be amazed at the same time, on how descriptive and accurate the scenes – as if I’m watching a movie in my head. I’m looking forward to reading more of Carbia’s writing. I highly recommend this book to anyone who wants a thrilling novel packed with unpredictable scenes and plot twists that will keep you on edge.

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EDITORIAL REVIEWS & AWARDS

#1 Best Seller in New Releases (Amazon)

#1 Best Seller in Horror (Barnes & Noble)

#1 Best Seller in American Horror (Amazon)

#1 Best Seller in Horror Classics (Amazon)

"The Raping of Ava DeSantis dethrones Fifty Shades of Grey as the most controversial novel in America…If you haven't heard of it yet, you certainly will soon."

Reuters News

Sorry, Hollywood. Looks like ‘The Queen of Horror’ is blowing up the literary world and you won’t be able to woo her back.

Latino LA Hollywood

An instant horror classic!

News Atlanta

The must-read book of the moment.

Yahoo News

One can see how this niche novel is turning into a worldwide phenomena.

TheStreet.com

A new powerhouse author is here to stay.

Boston Globe

She’s the next Stephen King.

Horror Society

In addition to Carbia's unique, powerful writing style, she has somehow managed to make a controversial subject appealing to the masses.

Atlanta Business Chronicle

"[Carbia] makes Fifty Shades of Grey read like a boring training manual, all while weaving a sophisticated, suspenseful thriller worthy of the industry's best writing accolades."

Washington Business Journal

A disturbingly perfect horror story. One of the best I've read all year!

Scream Magazine

A crazy, wild ride from page one. Action packed, full of suspense and horror. Great read!

Boundless Book Reviews

"The Raping of Ava DeSantis is a riveting read that is undeniably impossible to put down and really gives the reader a solid bit of entertainment along with an unexpected twist. Ladies, get ready to pump your fists in the air and cheer for a feminine phantom!"

Portsmouth Book Review

A breathtaking story, fast-paced, insanely vivid—just brilliant!

Roberts Book Reviews

"The Raping of Ava DeSantis is an especially well-crafted, compelling and complex novel."

Midwest Book Review

"Horror's next New York Times bestseller."

All Indie Magazine

It's the way Carbia weaves this horror tale that makes this book truly shine.

Gotham News

Most authors wouldn’t touch this subject with a ten foot keyboard, but Mylo Carbia not only accepts the challenge, she excels at it. She’s not called ‘The Queen of Horror’ for nothing.

Horror Cabin

A dazzling, sophisticated horror tale that breaks the rules of every genre.

Latino LA

Hollywood’s top ghostwriter grew up in a haunted house and she wants to pay it forward.

Daily Offbeat

Not since Quentin Tarantino or Diablo Cody have we seen anyone break the ‘writer nerd’ stereotype in such a big way.

Nobby's

[Carbia] has a crisp writing style with multi-dimensional characters and a firm grip on plot structure. We will certainly be on the lookout for other books by Ms. Carbia.

Ginger Nuts of Horror

It’s like nothing else out there.

News United

Screenwriting wunderkind Mylo Carbia makes a triumphant return.

Broadway World

We think Mylo Carbia is the best new author of the year.

Great-Novels.com

"Mylo Carbia is truly The Queen of Horror."

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THE RAPING OF AVA DESANTIS

A Horror Novel

Mylo Carbia

This book is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, organizations, places, events and incidents are either the product of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, events, or locales is entirely coincidental. This book is recommended for sophisticated readers due to strong language and brief scenes of graphic violence and sexuality. Copyright © 2015 by Mylo Carbia

All rights reserved. No part of this book may be reproduced in any form without permission in writing from the publisher, except for reviewers who may quote brief passages in a review.

Published in the United States of America by Rockefeller Publishing Group, Inc.

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www.RockefellerPublishing.com

Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication data is available upon request.

ISBN: 0996565205

Print ISBN: 9780996565202

Kindle ISBN: 9780996565219

eBook ISBN: 9780996565226

Edited by Jim Dempsey

Original cover artwork by Pete Tapang

Author photos by Steven Khan

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Distributed by Smashwords

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR

Mylo Carbia is a former Hollywood screenwriter turned #1 bestselling author widely known for her work in the horror-thriller genre and trademark of surprise twist endings. Her writing style has been described as a perfect mix between Stephen King, M. Night Shyamalan and Quentin Tarantino, but infused with a signature female sharpness that is all her own.

Born and raised in Jackson, New Jersey, Carbia famously spent her childhood years writing to escape the horrors of growing up in a severely haunted house. By the age of 17, she was already well established as a prolific young playwright. At the age of 30, her very first screenplay was optioned only 28 days after completion, earning Carbia a three picture deal and the cover of Hollywood Scriptwriter in 2003.

After that time, Carbia quietly penned numerous television and film projects under her production company Zohar Films—earning the nickname The Queen of Horror and the reputation of being Hollywood’s No. 1 horror film ghostwriter.

In 2015, Carbia left Hollywood to release a series of bestselling novels all featuring strong female protagonists. Her debut novel The Raping of Ava DeSantis won numerous 'Best Novel of the Year' awards and hit #1 Bestseller in New Releases (Amazon), #1 Bestseller in American Horror (Amazon) and #1 Bestseller in Horror (Barnes & Noble) only two days after its official release, and continues to receive critical acclaim from both avid readers and critics worldwide.

Today, Carbia lives with her husband and youngest son in New York City and South Florida. She continues to write exclusively for the literary world and plans to release seven more novels over the next several years.

www.MyloCarbia.com

ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS

Special Thanks To:

Pete Tapang for your amazing cover artwork. You are a living master.

Robert McKee for being such a wonderful teacher. You are the master of story.

Jim Dempsey for being a brilliant editor and accepting my writing style with open arms.

Anna Kaiser and the entire AKT InMotion crew for getting me out of my chair at least once a day while I wrote this book.

Sheree Bykofsky, J.E. Fishman, Mike Wells, Carla King, Helen Sedwick and Jeanne Veillette Bowerman for your outstanding advice as I transitioned from film into the literary world.

Lilly Ellison, Michelle Seanez, Pauline Cabrera, Taylor Love and Sydney Chamberlain for all of your hard work and support in making this book a success.

Arthur Massei for all of your love, support and most of all, your blessing to leave Hollywood to write novels. You are an amazing talent manager. Thank you for everything.

Gerard Baker, Michael Gabriel and Antonio Piedra for your belief in my abilities early on as a writer.

Rockefeller Publishing for taking a chance on such a powerful story (and a genius crazy writer).

Papo, Kuewpit and Gloria—just know that I am forever grateful! :)

For my Governor & Jett:

Thank you for loving me just the way I am.

CONTENTS

Editorial Reviews & Awards

Coming Soon From Mylo Carbia

About The Author

Acknowledgements

Copyright Information

Dedication

Prologue

1. Welcome To The Masquerade

2. Who The Fuck Is Ava DeSantis?

3. The Sperm Lottery

4. Black Acre

5. And So It Begins…

6. Dreams I’ll Never See

7. The Aftermath

8. The Awakening

9. The Devil Went Down To Georgia

10. The Verdict

11. 15 years, 7 Months & 28 Days Later

12. Too Close To Home

13. Uglier Homes And Gardens

14. Finding David Reilly

15. My Big Fat Southern Funeral

16. The ScarCom Gang

17. Lights, Camera, Fiction!

18. Kill The Messenger

19. The Spin Machine

20. A Tale Of Two Wesleys

21. The Gift Basket

22. Dinner At The White House

23. The Reunion

24. You Lucky Bastard

25. False Alarm

26. Bad News Always Comes In Threes

27. Burn Baby Burn!

28. The Spin Of Innocence

29. Visiting Hours

30. The Final Countdown

31. The Ides Of March

Epilogue

Author Message

Media Contact

Coming Soon

If an injury has to be done to a man it should be so severe that his vengeance need not be feared.

—Niccolò Machiavelli, The Prince, 1532

No amount of therapy can replace the joy of revenge writing.

—Mylo Carbia, All Indie Magazine, 2014

PROLOGUE

Atlanta, Georgia. The city that survived General Sherman’s torch in 1864, the death of Martin Luther King in 1968 and the Feline Plague of 2025, symbolizes the humble yet impenetrable warrior strength best embodied by Atlanta from the Ashes: a bronze statue of an angel raising a phoenix to the sky in Woodruff Park.

The city’s oldest and wealthiest families have most impressively adapted to our ever-changing landscape, morphing from close-minded white plantation owners to migrant worker presidential candidate supporters in less than a millisecond by historical time standards.

But Atlanta’s success over the past three hundred years required more than a penchant for resiliency, it depended upon a network of powerful, cunning strategists to stay relevant and alive. Some call it The Good Ole Boy Network others consider it remnants of Confederate Pride. Whatever one may label it, this cadre of powerful men is responsible for both the birth—and rebirth—of America’s most elegant and modern city in the South.

But as any notable historian will tell you…

All of these bastards must die.

CHAPTER 1

Welcome To The Masquerade

Tuesday, October 3, 2006

9:46 P.M.

Once a gleaming four-story nightclub catering to Atlanta’s mosh-pit-addicted youth, Le Masquerade had become a seedy members-only fetish club reduced in size to its former bi-level storage basement with a bustling organic foods market standing above as its pretentious keeper.

Inside, the club was dark, run-down and relatively empty for a weeknight (you know, Fridays for wives, Saturdays for sidepieces and Sundays for confession). On the main floor, a heavily-tattooed stripper danced center stage. She was petite and naked, of course, except for a pair of six-inch spike heels and a leather executioner mask with a zipper for a mouth. Her bright yellow eyes behind the mask revealed a vacant spirit, one that was completely immune to the pulsating techno music eroding the rotting plaster surrounding her.

In the audience, sitting alone, was Sebastian O’Connor, a pudgy Southern businessman in his mid-thirties. He would have blended in with the pedestrian audience if it weren’t for his armpit-stained Gucci dress shirt contrasting with his perfectly coiffed strawberry blonde hair. Couple that with his near-transparent skin (a shade that bragged a bloodline successful in avoiding the human chattel that once graced his family’s hundred-acre farm) and one could tell that this clown was a valid member of local royalty.

Sebastian’s affinity for the bondage world started at a young age (eight years old to be exact) when his Jamaican nanny caught him stealing gum from her purse and beat his ass so badly that it stung for hours. It was at this exact time that Sebastian experienced his first erection. Perhaps nothing more than a coincidence but more likely he’s been unable to separate the two events ever since.

Add this early experience to the gnawing silence of a drone-at-home wife managing the deafening chaos of three offspring under the age of five, and one can see what drove Sebastian to seek escapism here at least once a week. Fortunately, his role as a hedge fund manager gave him good reason to stay out late entertaining imaginary clients, particularly foreign ones unable to speak English well enough to tour the city on their own.

***

Utterly transfixed by the erotic executioner dance before him, Sebastian felt brazen enough to start touching himself under the table. This was the kind of place where anything goes, except the use of cell phones and cameras, which always had to be surrendered to the green-haired goddess at the front door.

Just as Sebastian began moving clandestinely to unzip his fly, a young, blonde, multi-body-part-pierced waitress interrupted him to serve another shot.

Need something else? she slurred. Moving slower than usual, the waitress struggled to add a fresh drink to the shot-glass-graveyard on his table.

Sebastian’s attention immediately shifted toward her flawless yet filthy body wrapped tightly in an oxblood leather mini-dress.

What’s your name again, sweetness? My memory’s shit.

Lost in her own smack-induced world, the waitress failed to respond. Sebastian suddenly grabbed her pot-holed arm, pulling her body close to his.

What’s your name again?

—Jah, Julie.

She stood motionless until Sebastian released his grip, graciously allowing her to continue clearing asshole shot glasses from the table.

I’m finally ready for some champagne, Jewel-yah.

The waitress mustered all her strength to speak at a normal pace. "Sure…okay…who do you want?"

Sebastian looked around the room, carefully considering his options. In one corner, he watched a dark Latino man in pristine white underwear dance for a gay couple…In another, he witnessed an eighty-year-old redhead licking the shoes of a young black businessman…And in the roped off VIP section, he noticed a barely legal Japanese schoolgirl performing a lap dance for a local sports anchor slash twice-convicted pedophile.

Just bring me one of your new girls.

The waitress acknowledged his order, piled the last two empty shot glasses on her overcrowded tray and left as fast as, uh, slow as she could.

***

At least ten minutes had passed when a tall, thin, elegant woman dressed in full leather gear appeared at Sebastian’s table.

You or-der champagne? Her deep, velvety voice was contaminated by a thick Russian accent.

Yes, ma’am. I did.

Good. I’m Vendela. Follow me.

Sweet Jesus. Sebastian was thrilled to get new blood that’s usually sourced from local runaway shelters. But this time, the dominatrix gave the impression that she was an old pro. Perhaps a visiting artist from another country? Definitely in her early-thirties, but still in her prime in every way.

Sebastian followed the dominatrix through the main nightclub and into the stairwell. From the back, she strutted an incredible young, tight body. Her thigh-high boots, matching thong and leather suspenders made her the prized snatch of the club. Her long-legged gait was rhythmic and reminiscent of a Clydesdale horse (you know, just like the coke-snorting, seven-figure superstars that glide across the runways of Paris each fall). Naturally, her ass was also perfect. Not too small, not too large but shapely in all of the right places. But what was most intriguing about this woman was the tattoo peeking from underneath her suspenders. It was some sort of large, black tribal symbol that spanned blade to blade across her back. Sebastian could not see the tattoo in detail, nor could he see her face from his vantage point, but he could acutely smell the brand new synthetic, black, bobbed wig and old leather biker cap she was wearing.

The dominatrix led Sebastian down a flight of stairs into The Dungeon, which also had the distinct honor of being the most subterranean basement in all of downtown Atlanta. At the bottom, they entered a long dark corridor lined with red curtained stalls. Flickers of candlelight bounced off the ceiling while the faint sound of music from the club upstairs and the new sounds of whips and moaning mixed together in an eerie way.

Sebastian cautiously followed the dominatrix through the corridor to the very last stall, far away

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