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Killer Cure
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Killer Cure is murder mystery set in the backdrop of a pharmaceutical company that claims to have found the medical cure for MS. One researcher has found the data sent to the FDA does not match the actual results of testing and before she can inform anyone is slain. Thus our intrepid detective begin their investigation.
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Killer Cure
Descrizione
Killer Cure is murder mystery set in the backdrop of a pharmaceutical company that claims to have found the medical cure for MS. One researcher has found the data sent to the FDA does not match the actual results of testing and before she can inform anyone is slain. Thus our intrepid detective begin their investigation.
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This is the second short story based in Seattle with Detective Ian Rite as the main investigator. Detective Rite and his partner work to discover who murdered a woman working for a big drug company and why information she might have tried to pass on to someone else about research tampering might be the reason she was killed. The premise of the story and getting to know Detective Rite might have been interesting but I felt this should have been the rough draft and a few more editorial revisions made before putting the story up for sale. Specific problems: The dialogues were not separated into paragraphs with each speaker being separated from the next. Verb tenses were not always consistent. Punctuation was used where it was not needed and needed where it was not used. I managed to finish the story and got the gist of it but would recommend a bit more editing in the near future.
Rating: 2